Friday, July 4, 2008







thank you thank you thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!

either this , or that
I dont know whom to thank and for what!

the always accredited few
or the never acknowledged new......

the demanding lot,
or the deserving one who rightfully fought!

the bowing humble petitioner
or the authoratarian despot!

the almighty above
or his innumerable mistakes below!

I dont know whom to thank and for what!
still........

thank you! thank you!! thank you!!!

5 comments:

Arpita said...

tujhe pata hai shivi.... wat i like bout ur poems... they r quite original... itne naye themes pe tu kaise soch leti hai re... shayad iisiliye kahte hain.... jahaan na pahunche ravi, wahaan pahunche kavi

Aniket said...

Nice!

Shivangi Shaily said...

I wish u ppl have also seen my 2nd composition, I applied more brain there!Although, this was a spontaneous one.

Manu Dev Gupta / Gilly said...

I read a couple of articles of urs..they are good and i would love to read more....but seriously i am unable to bear with the dark black background of ur blog page..and cannot sustain any further for this moment..will come back later...
i'd be glad if u please make the blog page look a little light in contrast n colour........

Shivangi Shaily said...

This is a very new serious problem. may be your monitor or LCD must be having some prob, because I dont find any prob in reading letters. black is the colour, I can identify myself with , better. Nevertheless, I'll try changing the background, although I'm not so much tech-friendly, but 'll try. [:)] u r always welcome to read my posts.